As I was walking to my class room I noticed Cleo running down the hall way with something in his mouth. When I looked closely I saw it was a baby rabbit. As I got nearer Cleo dropped it on the ground and I picked it up.
It was still alive, but only just.
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As I held the rabbit it died.
I felt really sad.
Cleo can be cute but he can be a killer!
Oh Jesse, that's so sad. You have described what happened and how you felt really well. I wonder what you did with the rabbit after it died? Blog back to let me know.
ReplyDeleteGreat use of personal voice Jesse. I can feel the emotion in your words. I love the statement "It was still alive, but only just." You just know what happens next don't you. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThe poor Bunny, Cleo can be a killer Jesse.
ReplyDeleteThose evil eyes of Cleo's will look deep into your soul and destroy it.
ReplyDeletegood adjectives and descriptive language making cleo turn from house cat to predator.
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